viernes, 15 de noviembre de 2013

Bullying

The bullying is a great problema only not in the schools, also is a problema in the Jobs, homes, neighborhood, etc.
In my personal expperience I was lived the two face of bullying because when I four years old in the neighborhood, the other boys insulting to me for I always have clean my clothes. But when I ten yeras old I was a bully because I was kicked and hited to two boys in the school and I don't remember why, but I belive that I molested this childs for pleasure


The Bullying isn’t a joke; the Bullying is violence, brutality and sickness.  When I had done Bullying to the two Childs I had feel  a liberation of myself because after to my sisters’ born, my parents do forgot to myself and the bullying was a form of call them attention. But I had create a violent character for this.
I’m not feel happiness to do Bullying because I done making suffer to this boys, but when I had conscience to I doing this childs were done convert in two of my best friends and the problems of the past don’t exist.
Is good for laughing to our self because helping to socialize with our partners. But   you do laugh with me and not of myself.

You don’t bullying because is bad for you, for the partners with problems and for all society.
Destroy the Bullying and playing and fun with your partners and friends

1 comentario:

  1. Cristian,

    WC: 247. It was 300.

    You should check the speeling of the following words:

    problema, expperience, yeras childs hited belive. You should take care of the edition of your text, you have made too many mistakes.

    Please check:

    (The) bullying is a great PROBLEM

    …IT IS also (is) a PROBLEM

    …In my personal EXPERIENCE, I (was) lived the two faceS of bullying because when I WAS four years

    the other boys (insulting) INSULTED (to) me (for) BECAUSE I always have my clothes CLEAN. But when I WAS ten YEARS old

    …but I that I (molested) this for pleasure


    (The) Bullying isn’t a joke; (the) Bullying is violence, brutality
    … to the CHILDREN (Childs) I (had feel) FELT a liberation of myself because after (to) my sisters WAS (’) born, my parents (do forgot to myself) FORGOT ME

    … a form of callING (them) THEIR attention. But I had created? a violent character for this.

    I (’m not) DO NOT feel happiness to do Bullying because I (done making) MADE (to this) THESE boys suffer, but when I had conscience (to I doing this childs) (were done convert???)

    IT Is good TO LAUGH (for laughing to our self) AT OURSELVES because (helping) IT HELPS to socialize with our partners. But you do laugh with me and not AT ME
    (of myself).

    You don’t (bullying) BULLY because THIS is bad for you,


    Cheers,

    JC

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